Here are some background informations about the classical (linearized) PLL model (s-domain)
* Summing junction compares PHI_in(s) (input) with PHI_out(s)
* Kd is the PD constant and is given in V/rad
* Loop filter function Fr(s) is given in V/V
* The VCO function (phase output PHI_out) is Fo=Ko/s with the VCO constant Ko in rad/Vs
* The phase input PHI_in is derived from the frequency input via the function 1/s (not part of the loop).
From this, the closed-loop transfer function is:
PHI_out(s)/(PHI_in(s)=H(s)=Kd*Fr(s)*Ko/(s+Kd*Fr(s)*Ko)
Question to you:
* What are the input and output variables in the function Hopen(s) as given by you?
* In your diagram, the transconductance gm creates a voltage across R||C which controls the oscillator.
But why do you consider this oscillator as a CCO (and not as a VCO)?
Comment: It is rather uncommon (and can lead to interpretation errors) when the closed -loop is a mixture between a block diagram and a circuit diagram (as in your case),
Examples:
1) Will the current out of the block gm distributed between the two connected blocks (RC combination resp. CCO-input) - yes or no?
2) Is the output signal of the block "CP" a voltage - and what is function of C1 in this case?