Hi,
is there something wrong with the circuit?
I did no go very deep into the circuit.
I see nothing really "wrong". I see a lot of effort...many Opamps, comparators and logic.
It's clean, with decoupling capacitors, with hysteresis and - one the first sight - well chosen parts.
But if I had to to the same I'd do it differently. This does not mean that yours is wrong...just another way.
I'd keep the analog part minimal, just to get best quality, then feed it to the ADC of a microcontroller and let the software do all the hysteresis, timing, combinatorial logic.
Less part count, less drift, better to adjust, better to debug....I think it makes life easier.
Do you have a scope? Measure the voltage at C17 during enabling the load.
I see C17 = 1uF is the input reservoir .... but then you try to charge about 800uF....
This may cause trouble.
Compare it with two boxes of water. One is the 10l input box.....if it has a certain level you try to fill a 8000l box to the same level as the 10l box. On first piece of time all drops down to a 0.12% level ...
Now do it the other way round. Have a 8000l input reservoir, when it has a certain level fill the 10l box ...now the level at the input box just drops to 99.88% of level...almost no drop...
I assume you have a reason why you designed it the way you did. From the circuit I assume you want the capacitors close to your load .. to have low ripple = high quality supply at the load..
If so ... I 'd find out the behavior of the load...current draw, peaks, timing, frequency, is there a softstart option...
Klaus