I'm not surprised it doesn't work.
1. Q1 stage is an audio amplifier, the component values do not allow low speed (low frequency) changes in input signal to get through but the LDR is only capable of responding slowly. If you really want to use an LDR, it is probably better connected between the TR pins of the timers directly to ground.
2. Powering U2 from the output of U1 isn't a good idea.
3. U3 seems to be missing ground and VCC connections.
I can't work out what the stages are supposed to do. I would guess both 555s are supposed to trigger simultaneously but the second one wouldn't have any supply until the first one had triggered. Even then, you would be feeding a counter that has no reset so its output might stop high or low almost randomly.
Brian.