running the sim, i see what you mean......there are two trigger pules to the monostable for each FET-ON pulse...but this doesnt matter becasue the second one is caused by the first one, (as you say?) and the FETs are ON at that time anyway....so who cares if another pulse happens then.
It would be great if the simulation could be minorly adjusted to bring out the problem that you speak of....but i cannot bring out problems from listening to your posts.....though maybe i am interpreting your words incorrectly.
......running the simulation, after 70us, it works like a dream.....so i am loathe to strike the circuit so low..........my attitude toward this circuit is nowhere near as disfavouring as your own......i cannot understand how such a beatiful simulation operation is making you so doubtful as to this circuit?
My apologies FvM, i originally connected the "gate" to ground, but have now corrected this above.